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锦才告诉你如何写好雅思大作文

2025-09-24 15:13:33

一、审题 & 构思(3-5分钟)


  1. 看清题型

    • 同意/不同意 (To what extent do you agree?)

    • 双边讨论 (Discuss both views and give your opinion)

    • 问题解决 (Problems and solutions)

    • 优劣利弊 (Advantages and disadvantages)

    • 直接问观点 (Do you think…?)


  2. 圈关键词

    找到题目里的核心主题词和限定词(时间、地点、人群等)。

    例如:Some people think governments should invest more in public services rather than in arts such as music and painting.
    关键词:governments, public services, arts
  3. 列出2-3个主要论点

    每个论点对应一个段落,不要贪多,一主两辅最好




二、文章结构(4段万能结构)



引言 (Introduction)


  • 改写题目(paraphrase)

  • 表明立场(同意/不同意/部分同意/探讨)



例:

While some argue that governments should prioritize public services, I believe that investing in the arts is equally essential because it enriches cultural identity and supports social well-being.



主体段1 (Body 1)


  • 主题句(Topic sentence,明确观点)

  • 展开解释(Why?)

  • 举例说明(Example / data / personal observation)

  • 小结(回扣主题)



例:

Firstly, public services such as healthcare and education are fundamental to citizens’ well-being. Without sufficient funding, hospitals may struggle to provide timely treatments, and schools may fail to deliver quality education. For instance, during the COVID-19 pandemic, countries with robust healthcare systems were able to reduce mortality rates significantly.



主体段2 (Body 2)


  • 同上,换一个论点(可以支持对方观点,但最后回扣自己立场)



例:

On the other hand, the arts also deserve investment because they play a vital role in preserving cultural heritage and boosting tourism. For example, countries like Italy and France have benefited economically from their artistic treasures, attracting millions of visitors each year.



结论 (Conclusion)


  • 重申立场

  • 简要总结论点(不用举例)



例:

In conclusion, although funding public services is undeniably important, governments should not neglect the arts, as they contribute to both cultural identity and economic growth. A balanced approach would therefore be the most beneficial.



三、语言提升技巧


  1. 避免口语化:用 academic style,例如 kids → children, good → beneficial, bad → detrimental

  2. 使用多样连接词

    • 添加:moreover, in addition, what’s more

    • 转折:however, nevertheless, by contrast

    • 因果:as a result, therefore, consequently


  3. 多样句式

    • 简单句 + 复合句 + 被动语态

    • 使用定语从句、让步状语从句、条件句





四、备考小技巧


  • 模版化结构:保证逻辑不会乱。

  • 积累话题词汇:教育、科技、环境、政府、健康、媒体等常见主题。

  • 定时练习:40分钟控制在 250–280词左右。


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