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锦才告诉你如何写好雅思小作文

2025-09-24 15:16:16

一、审题与观察(2–3分钟)


  1. 确认题型

    • 图表类(柱状图、折线图、饼图、表格、混合图)

    • 流程图(process)

    • 地图(map, plan)


  2. 圈出时间 & 对象

    • 看是否有年份 → 动态数据(要写趋势)

    • 没有年份 → 静态数据(要写对比)


  3. 找规律

    • 最大值、最小值

    • 上升/下降趋势

    • 明显对比





二、文章结构(4段模板)



引言 (Introduction)


  • 改写题目(paraphrase,不要照抄)

    例:

    The bar chart illustrates the proportion of household income spent on different categories in five European countries in 2010.




概述 (Overview) – 必须有!


  • 总体趋势 / 最大最小 / 明显特征

  • 不要写具体数字,这里只要“鸟瞰总结”



例:

Overall, it is clear that food accounted for the highest expenditure in most countries, while leisure activities made up the smallest share.



主体段 1 (Body 1)


  • 描述 一部分数据(逻辑分组:时间/国家/类别)

  • 先用总体描述,再加具体数据支撑



例:

In terms of food spending, France and Italy showed the highest percentages, at 32% and 30% respectively. By contrast, Germany allocated only 20% of its income to food.



主体段 2 (Body 2)


  • 描述 另一部分数据,注意衔接和对比



例:

Leisure activities, on the other hand, accounted for the smallest share of expenditure in all five countries. The UK spent the most on leisure at 12%, while Spain and Italy both spent under 8%.



结论 (Conclusion) – 可选


  • 小作文不是必须有结论,但如果有余力,可以用一句话 再次概括

    例:

    In summary, food dominated household spending in most countries, whereas leisure was consistently the least significant category.




三、语言技巧


  1. 多样化表达趋势

    • 上升:increase, rise, grow, climb, soar

    • 下降:decrease, fall, drop, decline, plummet

    • 稳定:remain stable, stay constant, plateau

    • 波动:fluctuate, vary, experience ups and downs


  2. 避免重复用数字

    不要句句都写百分比,可以用比较:

    • twice as much as…

    • slightly higher than…

    • by contrast / in comparison


  3. 词汇地道

    • proportion, percentage, figure, expenditure, category, segment

    • accounted for, represented, made up





四、备考小技巧


  • 先写 overview,这是考官重点看分的地方。

  • 不要写观点(no I think / in my opinion)。

  • 字数控制在 170–190,太短扣分,太长浪费时间。

  • 平时可以用剑桥真题里的图表练习,每天 1 篇,20 分钟定时。


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